8 thoughts on “This is my third draft of this post.”

1. Clearly the revising paid off, because you show impressive ‘economy of word’ here, expressing in just ONE WORD what some people would need at least four or five to say. 🙂

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   June 9, 2014 at 5:03 PM Reply

2. Yep – some days that happens 😀
   Empathy! 😀

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   June 9, 2014 at 5:04 PM Reply

3. It’s beautiful wipes tear

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   June 9, 2014 at 5:06 PM Reply

4. Best work yet!

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   June 9, 2014 at 5:08 PM Reply

5. This is some tight writing. You should start shopping around for publishers!

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   June 9, 2014 at 5:09 PM Reply

6. If this is what garners such rave reviews I Have been doing it wrong all along , shuffles feet head bowed shuts door gently.

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   June 9, 2014 at 7:32 PM Reply

7. Brevity at its best! Kudos!

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   June 10, 2014 at 9:25 AM Reply

8. Well put.

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   June 10, 2014 at 7:15 PM Reply