New SKYLIGHTS review, and another announcement

Screen Shot 2015-01-12 at 22.14.14Is it possible– I think it is– that Skylights hasn’t actually had a review on a blog yet?  I’m up to seven at Amazon, all of which are four- or five-star reviews, and my interweb-buddy D. Emery Bunn just posted a four-star review of the book over at his website.  He’d already provided me probably my favorite Twitter-friendly tag line for the book (“Half love letter to NASA, half space exploration porn”) and he just today came through with a full review.

It’s interesting, actually: this is probably the most critical any reviewer of the book has been, especially if I don’t count a textless two-star review at Goodreads.  He liked it, but he definitely goes into some details about the parts of the book that didn’t work for him.  I’m linking it anyway because I think the criticisms he raises are completely fair, and at least a couple of them are the direct result of deliberate decisions I made while I was writing the book.  Sadly, not everyone is going to unconditionally love every single word I write.

Even though you all should.

Anyway, check the review out; the book itself remains a scant $4.95 as an ebook at Amazon, or a little bit more if you want the print edition.


I promised another announcement: I found out that Stone Skin Press was issuing a call for submissions for their anthology Swords v. Cthulhu yesterday.  Thought about it, walked out to the living room, and said to my wife “Do you think I can pull together a submission for this in just two weeks?”

“Sure you can,” she said.

And maybe an hour later, I had my story– a story that, granted, has had barely a single word committed to a word processing document just yet, but who needs that, right?  Anyway, point is, I’m totally in on submitting something to this anthology, which is always fun, and I’m posting it here because I have a sneaking suspicion that I have a few among my regular readership who might be interested in being my competition.

Anyway.  That’s it for now; I’ll try and shut up until tonight unless something really interesting happens.

Review: DARKNESS CONCEALED, by D. Emery Bunn

Darkness_Concealed_cover-1500x940As I said a couple of days ago, I am a terrible friend to my fellow independent authors.  However, I’ve been doing my best to curtail that tendency lately and making myself read on my Kindle.  Surprisingly, it hasn’t had the same weird sleep-preventing effects on my wife that it was having when I first bought it.  So maybe I can keep this up for a while.  At any rate, the second book that I’ll be reviewing (of at least three; there will likely be one more review this weekend) is of D. Emery Bunn’s Darkness Concealed.  You’ll have heard Emery’s name around here once or twice before; he’s a Twitter buddy and I interviewed him here when the book first came out.

Bunn bills Darkness Concealed as a dark fantasy, and… well, yeah.  Right on the nose, that.  This is not for the faint of heart, kids; the book starts with a family being massacred by demons in their house, and while the violence is never gratuitous, at least by my standards, that event sorta sets a bit of a tone for the rest of the book.  And seeing as the rest of the book revolves around the four main characters trying to find a) a reason for and b) a way to prevent a recurring near-apocalypse that regularly slaughters a fair chunk of the human populace… so yeah, it’s a bit on the dark side.

Darkness Concealed is book one of a trilogy, and it shows; there are a number of weird little bits here and there that are never explained (one of the characters has somebody else living in her head, for example) and there are plenty of questions and plot points left dangling for the sequels.  That would be a weakness in the hands of a less skilled author; here it just makes the world look bigger and avoids the dodge of “self-contained first book then a duology makes a trilogy,” a phenomenon I’ve kinda gotten tired of.  There are clearly more answers coming and more story here, so if you’re the type who wants everything tied up nice and neat with a bow on it when you close the book (or, uh, exit the Kindle app?) this may not be the book for you.

Why is this a book for you?  Worldbuilding.  Bunn has big ideas for how the word of Telthan works, and some of the settings that the characters visit, including a ruined city, a magical library tower and a damn-near-literal castle at the end of the world, really made the book for me.  These characters are searching for answers, and they’ll go wherever they need to to get them; the author clearly has no shortage of cool locales for them to visit along the way, and one of the joys of the book for me was seeing what they would encounter next.

Three dolla ninety-nine cent at the Amazon.  Check it out, you shall.

INTERVIEW: D. Emery Bunn, author of DARKNESS CONCEALED

41MI-RC5shL._AA278_PIkin4,BottomRight,-51,22_AA300_SH20_OU01_You may have noticed if you hang out with the same crowd of Super Cool Independent Writer People that I do: D. Emery Bunn’s book Darkness Concealed released earlier this week.

Because I am lazy and didn’t get to it in time a skilled marketer, I suggested to Emery that we do an interview but schedule it for Friday— today, in other words– so that folk would see it heading into the weekend and maybe he’d get a little bump.  Totally has nothing to do with me not getting my shit together before launch day. Nothing at all.

Anyway, I wrote some stupid questions and fired them off his way and he actually put up with my nonsense.  Check out the interview, and check out the book:

1) Forget the book for a minute; tell me about yourself.

But…but…the book! Okay, fine, I’ll talk about me. Engineer by day; writer, reader, and gamer by night. I never found the beach interesting enough for long walks on it, and I positively love a crescent moon.

Is that enough? No?

Cruel taskmaster…more specifically I do both tabletop and video games, depending on the night. I’m a hardcore Twitter addict, and still wonder how I thought it was pointless for years before starting on this writing thing.

2) Now tell me about Darkness Concealed.  Who’s the target audience?  What other writers or books would you compare it to?

In a sentence, Darkness Concealed is about a recurring apocalypse no one can explain, and the quest of four strangers to try to explain it at their own peril. It’s dark fantasy, with liberal doses of mystery and horror everywhere. Oh, and a ton of humor. I’m not morbidly depressing, only slightly saddening.

I’ve got several target audiences. People who…
…are tired of stock fantasy tropes used in stock ways with very few twists to mix it up.
…want to try to solve an intricate mystery where most of the answers are hidden.
…want a detailed exploration of philosophical themes and subtext without having them browbeaten.
…love engaging characters with vastly different personalities.
…desire to have an uncertain conclusion instead of a foregone one.

3) Does your book pass the Bechdel test?

It passes it with straight A’s, 100%, and flawless victory. I have two female characters in the story, and at no point do they talk about a man in a romantic way. At best, they have their gripes with the two males accompanying them.

4) Give me your single favorite sentence from Darkness Concealed.

A single one? You sure you didn’t mean “top three” or “quick hit list”? I swear, you’re a sadist. I’d have to say it’s the very opening line:

“Mommy, what’s going on?”

In so many ways, those words encapsulate the entire plot and theme of not just this story, but the trilogy in sum.

5) Describe your process for writing the book a bit.  How long did it take you?  How long did the idea for the book percolate in your head before you finally had everything on the page?

I’m going to answer this backward…ish. The land of Telthan came into my mind in December 2008 as the result of wanting to apply to a worldbuilding play by post D&D campaign. I was taking a shower (ha!), thinking about what it should be, and one sentence came to me: “It’s a peaceful, idyllic pastureland…except the one day where nearly everyone dies.” Thus was born the Darkening and the land it afflicts.

The campaign failed. Too much overhead for the DM and the players. I took the setting wholesale and started my own campaign to explore it, and go over the full arc that was in my mind. Two attempts at my own campaign failed, because the arc was too particular, too limiting to the players. This was even after I’d written up a full campaign arc outline while at Basic Military Training, pouring my pent-up creativity straight into the pages. In a lot of ways, I consider the outline some of my most creative work.

Problem is…I lost the outline while moving to my first base in July 2010. I thought I’d left it at my hotel room the night before making it there. I wrote the first, second, and third drafts based purely on the memory of that outline. Then a month or so ago I was sifting through some old files and out it falls. It’s sitting over there on my desk, so unlike what I’ve written onto the page, but the same general idea.

Back to the present…

Honestly, writing this book is a study in me being a procrastinating fool who doesn’t realize what he has in his hands. I wrote the first draft mostly during NaNoWriMo 2012, wrote another 23k in the two months following…then abandoned it because I’d written myself into a corner.

I didn’t touch it again until NaNo 2013, ending up stumbling around for the first couple of days trying to remember my plot thread. You see, I threw out the first draft as an unsalvageable mess. This has since turned into a trend with my other work.

Anyways, NaNo 2013. I wrote…a lot. The entire second draft, weighing in at 103,259 words, got completed that month. Me getting stuck in Dallas-Fort Worth airport due to a nasty winter storm certainly helped (15k from those 48 hours alone). But I finished it…and I loved what I’d written. Sure, it had faults, but I had finished a novel all the way through. (Point of context, I’ve won NaNo 3 times…and only finished the resultant novel once)

And if I can write a novel, gosh-darnit I can revise the thing into publishable shape. I sent the draft off to a few beta readers, who came back with some good things to go and fix. Which I did…slowly. Procrastination and a ton of other responsibilities are nasty conspirators, and while it took me about a month (January) to finish the first part and another three weeks (February-March) for the third, parts 2 and 4 were on hold until the middle of May. Whereupon I knocked them out in six weeks.

I sent the finished third draft at the beginning of July to far more beta readers than the second had seen…and got the right comments back. The kind that say “fix these minor issues, polish the grammar, and publish”. None of them actually said that, but what they commented on signaled that.

6) If the book had a soundtrack, which bands would be featured?

Blind Guardian, Hammerfall, DragonForce, and tons of orchestral in the vein of Hans Zimmer and John Williams. Honestly, put Blind Guardian’s Sacred Worlds (Warning: extremely epic, and must be played loud) on in the background whenever Gerald is featured.

7) If you die halfway through writing the third book in the Darkness trilogy, which author would you pick to finish your work?  Don’t say Brandon Sanderson.

At this point in time, I’ll be happy with finishing the second book. I don’t have any author in mind for that sort of thing.

8) How long would it take Grond to beat up your main character?

And here I thought Grond was the more pragmatic of the two. Why beat up a bunch of random people he doesn’t know who haven’t wronged him? Anyways, I consider all of my characters main, so…

Caleb: One punch and he’s down. Bonus points for getting him to mumble “I must have done something wrong.”
Alexandra: They’d fight each other to a stalemate, realize that it’s pointless, and shake hands before parting ways.
Ivan: Would take a punch, then jump back and demand an explanation “for the unexpected and undeserved intrusion upon my personal space. And this nasty bruise.” Would promptly evade every other punch until he got so tired that he’d fall unconscious all on his own.
Liz: No punch would land. He’d throw one, and she’d skip out of the bar without a second thought about fighting fair.

9)  Assuming I love it, how long do you think it’ll be until the sequel comes out?  Any other projects in the pipeline that we should know about?

Assuming you love it? I thought that was a foregone conclusion. 😉

Tentative plan on Darkness Revealed is next summer. We’ll see how it goes.

For October, I’m going to get back to the second draft of my cyberpunk novella Nikolay. It’s all about a guy who just wants to not be normal…in a world where normal is enforced by law.

10) I pre-ordered it like four days before it came out.  Shower me with affection!

Only four days? Real fans would’ve preordered it one week out, when I pushed the final copy to retailers! Here, have a token of my gratitude instead of a shower of it.

Thanks for putting up with me, at least for a little while. Oh, and if people are wanting to know where to harass me:

– Blog (includes free PDF of Darkness Concealed): www.DEmeryBunn.com
– Twitter: @DEmeryBunn
– EMail: emery (at) DEmeryBunn.com

Oh, and the book is on Amazon , Google and Kobo. Go get it!

Some stuff

First, because I don’t want to step on Emery’s announcement, make sure you check out Darkness Concealed, which launches today.

Second, I keep almost writing a post about Nicki Minaj, and I probably will sooner or later.  Weirdly, I found this little piece here through an article about Clair Huxtable, which you ought to read, and then you ought to check this video out because it’s interesting:

The more I find out about this lady, the more interesting she gets.  I love it when that happens.

Oh one more thing.  The Skylights cover is fully lettered now:

Final Cover Mock Med

It drops the 30th, guys.  One week.

So excited.

Need something to read?

41MI-RC5shL._AA278_PIkin4,BottomRight,-51,22_AA300_SH20_OU01_My buddy D. Emery Bunn’s debut novel Darkness Concealed is out today!  Head over to Amazon and check it out, and look for an interview with him later this week.  I ask stupid questions and he puts up with them!  It’s fun!

There may be too many exclamation points in this post.