REVIEW: The Storm Beneath a Midnight Sun, by Alexander Dan Vilhjálmsson

I was a big fan of Alexander Dan Vilhjálmsson’s Shadows of the Short Days, which made my Top 11 Books list last year. The sequel has been sitting on my shelf waiting for me to get to it for a minute, and I just finished it tonight, and …

… well, I’m kinda torn. Shadows got tons of comparisons to China Miéville, and Storm has been as well, but this one isn’t Miéville so much as it is pure Lovecraft. Like, it’s a book-length Icelandic reimagining of Mountains of Madness; there are byakhee and Elder Things and what amounts to a Deep Ones cult and a talking brain in a jar and unnamable colors and fungi from Yuggoth. It’s so overt that I don’t understand how anyone managed to miss it.

That’s not a complaint, mind you, as I remain an unabashed fan of Lovecraft’s mythos despite the fact that the man himself was the worst kind of trash. And this is absolutely good nu-Lovecraft, which is something I’d like to see more of. But there’s no escaping the fact that one of my favorite things about the first book was its breathtaking uniqueness compared to everything else on my shelves, and this book is a lot of things, but “breathtakingly unique” isn’t one of them.

It also ends strangely, with the climax a good hundred pages before the end of the book and then a leap forward by a decade or so, and while it very well could be my fault for trying to read after getting home from work on a Friday I felt like the last part of the book was somewhat incoherent and unnecessary. I’ve only said this once before, but when you hit that time jump, if you’re not a hundred percent invested, you can probably get away with putting the book down at that point. It’s not quite as severe as the quality drop in Seveneves— I’ve never seen anything else that has been– but it’s jarring and more than a little under explained.

(There’s another connection with Seveneves, actually; take a close look at the cover.)

And it’s at this point where I realize that I’m in paragraph five and I haven’t mentioned the plot yet, but really, you already know. If you liked the first book and you like Miéville and Lovecraft and don’t mind a lot of Icelandic vocabulary you ought to pick this up. Hell, if you haven’t read the first book you can probably get away with reading this one anyway, as the connections to the first book aren’t as strong as you might generally expect. It’s a loose sequel, and saying more would constitute spoilers, but I think it works as a standalone.

On to the next three Red Rising books.

On terrible people and my time & money

While I’ve been doing some DMing for my wife and son lately, the last time I spent serious time playing role-playing games was in college. I lost my group when I moved to grad school, and basically never tried to find another one after that. My college group mostly bounced back and forth between Call of Cthulhu and Dungeons and Dragons.

One of the best campaigns I was ever involved in was a published Call of Cthulhu game called Horror on the Orient Express. I have some of my best memories as a gamer from that campaign; it was a tremendous achievement in game design and, not for nothing, was expertly run by our DM as well.

I recently discovered that Chaosium, the company that owns Call of Cthulhu, was planning on updating and republishing Horror on the Orient Express in a new, two-volume, 700-page, ludicrously expensive version for their 7th edition rules. It’ll be out in a couple of months.

Did I say ludicrously expensive? I don’t care, I’m buying it anyway. This is why I have a job.

Well, it’s for the seventh edition, and while I doubt that the seventh edition is all that different from the rules I’m familiar with (and it’s not like I intend to run this; I’m buying it for nostalgia value and to reread it) it felt weird to think I was going to buy an adventure for 7th edition Call of Cthulhu without actually owning the core rulebooks for 7th edition Call of Cthulhu.

So I spent a hell of a lot of money at the Griffon yesterday. Because these damn things are pricey, even under normal circumstances.

Let’s talk about H.P. Lovecraft a little bit.

Just in case you’re not familiar with him (although I doubt that’s going to be the case for too many of you; after all, you’re here,) the Call of Cthulhu game is based on a mythos created by the works of an author named Howard Phillips Lovecraft. H.P. Lovecraft’s influence on fantasy writing and specifically the horror genre is kind of difficult to overstate. His work is a big deal, and damn near everybody who works in genre has read him. He was also an enormous, disgusting racist, and his racism bled into a lot of his work. Now, when I say that about somebody who was born in 1890, a lot of people are going to shrug. “He was a product of his time,” they’ll say. “We can’t judge people Back Then by our modern moral standards.” Nah. H.P. Lovecraft was so much of a racist that it was notable in the 1920s. Like, ordinary run-of-the-mill 1920 white people thought this guy’s ideas about race were kinda fucked up. Google the name of his cat sometime. The guy was a hell of a writer, but he was trash as a person.

Typically I do not like to spend money that will trickle into the hands of giant fucking racists. However, in the case of Lovecraft, while the overall picture is complicated, his work is mostly in the public domain by now. Furthermore, Lovecraft had no children and his wife divorced him (well, sorta) a few years before he died, so there’s not even a family that money spent on Call of Cthulhu is going to go to.

But the guy’s legacy still has to be grappled with, right? The World Fantasy Award used to literally be a bust of his head; it was remodeled in recent years to a (much better) excellently creepy full-moon-behind-a-tree version after Nnedi Okorafor, who is Nigerian-American, won the award and pointed out that the greatest award of her literary life meant that she had to look at the face of a dude who literally didn’t think she was human every day. There is a long, ongoing, and very likely never-ending conversation about whether we can separate art from artist, but we can definitely avoid literally honoring the artist when that artist turns out to have been a terrible person. If that person is still benefiting from the sale of their art, then you need to have a deeper conversation. H.P. Lovecraft has been dead for 80-some-odd years and buying his books doesn’t send money to anyone connected to him, so reading his stories isn’t as problematic as, say, reading the work of still-living garbage humans John C. Wright or Orson Scott Card.

(“As problematic,” I said. And I’m not going to spend one second trying to talk someone out of feeling otherwise; if you feel like I’m making a distinction without a difference, let me know.)

All of this may be more lead-in than this issue deserves, but I was leafing through my new rulebooks last night and, as one probably might expect, Lovecraft’s name is all over this thing. And I thought about that for a bit, and went to the first few pages of the book, looking to see what they had to say about the man himself. And I was startled to discover that the official 7th edition Call of Cthulhu rulebooks devote two sentences of a chapter called “H.P. Lovecraft and the Cthulhu Mythos” to talking about Lovecraft’s racism, and those two sentences are basically there to utterly dismiss it. The game, remember, is traditionally set in the 1920s, not exactly a great time for American race relations, to say nothing of the sexism, and the author is one of literature’s most famous racists.

I’m a little surprised and more than a little disappointed that the game doesn’t address this more directly, is what I’m trying to say here. The newest edition of the Dungeons and Dragons rulebook has a whole section at the beginning of the book about how players of all races, genders and sexualities are welcome in the game and theirs is set in an explicitly fantasy world. Call of Cthulhu is not only based on the work of a racist but is set in the 1920s, when any number of people who might be interested in the game now might face some issues playing characters who reflect them. I can easily imagine a Keeper making the life of a Black or gay or Asian or enby or hell even female player miserable because That’s How Things Were Back Then. Maybe, in our pair of oversized-hardback, two-column, 400-page rulebooks we should take at least a few paragraphs to talk about how to navigate that? Particularly in the Keeper’s Handbook, the book for the person running the games? This hobby has kind of a reputation for being a little exclusionary; can we take some time to push back on that, please? Just a little?

I dunno. I’m not– at least not without further reading, and again I’ve only skimmed these books since buying them– accusing the Chaosium writers of being racist or sexist. Right now what I’m specifically saying is that there’s a huge blind spot here, and it’s kind of made me uneasy about shoveling more money toward this company. I may feel differently once I’ve read through the rulebooks; if I discover I’ve missed something important (and there’s 800 pages of material here, so this is entirely possible) I’ll update later. But this is squicky, and I don’t like it, and I thought that was worth talking about a little bit.

Day off agenda

originalOkay.

A rough list of today’s agenda items, in approximate order of how likely the tasks are to be accomplished:

  • Get my Lazy Ass out of Bed (done!)
  • Shower
  • Breakfast
  • Somehow avoid watching the three episodes of True Detective and the episode of Walking Dead that are waiting for my wife to come home
  • Finish reading The King in Yellow; see above.
  • Find everything H.P. Lovecraft wrote involving Hastur; read that too.  (Mental note: The Whisperer in Darkness)
  • Real blog post not involving a bullet list
  • Get grading caught up
  • Lesson planning for this week
  • Success groups
  • Catch up on email
  • Write report for administrative team on SAP.  (Trust me.)
  • Get house generally clean.
  • Pull wallpaper down in bathroom.
  • Restructure back wall in bathroom.
  • Make some progress on BA 6.
  • Finish editing on BA 5.
  • Finish the third Wheel of Time book.
  • Go to grocery, one or two other shopping errands.

All before 5 PM, which is when I’m making dinner.  Probably ought to start on item 2, I guess.  (Later note:  Well, hell, all the stuff I’ve done this morning wasn’t on the list.  Time to change the list!)

In which wrong entertains me

mavericks-multi-monitor_dtI did something incredibly dumb today, and luckily for me it seems to have worked out:  further cementing my status as an Apple fanboy, I upgraded the system software on every computing device I own (excepting only my aging, decrepit Windows laptop) in the same evening:  my phone, my iPad, and my desktop all got shiny new upgrades tonight– granted, the two mobile devices were already on iOS 7, and so their upgrades were incremental, but I just did a day-of-release upgrade to OS X 10.9 Mavericks, and it hasn’t made the computer blow up yet.  Hooray for progress!

I recently became aware of a website called I Write Like, which purports to analyze your writing and tell you which famous author you write like.  I have my own theories about this, of course, which I won’t actually share because they make me seem like a wanker no matter who the author is, but I was curious about it.  The verdict:  Give me a god damn break.

I started by feeding it the “10 SF/Fantasy Works that meant the Most to Me” essay from last week, which by the way is currently the most popular post I’ve written here.   I didn’t really know what to think of that one; I wasn’t really trying to channel anyone in particular (even though I got the idea from Scalzi) and it was basically just an essay.  Not much would have surprised me.

It gave me…

Nah, wait for it.

A little longer.

H. P. fucking Lovecraft.

Which right there just eliminates any chance of this being anything real.  I initially suspected it actually chose Lovecraft out of a hat; I just did it again on a different computer and it gave me the same result, so it’s doing something other than just picking, but I’ll be damned if I have any idea what.  Not that I mind being compared to Lovecraft, as I love his work, but… no.  Come the fuck on.

So then I decided to put in some fiction, and gave it the first few paragraphs of my novel Skylights.  Which is a science fiction novel, set on Mars.  And is therefore not very Lovecraftian.

It gave me Chuck Palahniuk, which… well, I don’t read Palahniuk, actually, but my based-on-nothing impression of his writing style does not cause me to immediately reject this suggestion.

Then I remembered a piece I did a couple of years ago where I was deliberately aping H.P. Lovecraft.  And, to my mind, at least, I did a pretty decent job of it.  So I fed that in.

Dan fucking Brown.

But!

The other piece I did a couple of years ago where I was trying to imitate someone’s style– this time Salman Rushdie– also gave me H.P. Lovecraft.

(This blog post?  Also Lovecraft.)

I think this thing only actually has four authors in it.


EDIT:  at MLW’s suggestion, I fed a bit of a Palahniuk short story and the first few paragraphs of Lovecraft’s At the Mountains of Madness into the thing.  It got them both right.